I was walking in the museum until I saw a very interesting statueā¦so I thought to my self that maybe it would be cool if I touched it! So I became closer and closer to the statue until I saw a guard yelling and running, āKID KID! IM WARNING YOU, YOU DO NOT, I REAPET, DO NOT WANT TO TOUCH THAT STATUE!ā But the guard was to late I already touch it, to my surprise nothing happenedā¦
Until I heard a rumble and the ground started shaking the guard yelled again āRUUUN!ā I was so scaredā¦but then I asked to myself, where is my mum and dad?
Josie,
I felt the ‘pull’ of the statue toward your narrator. I could also feel the dread in the guard’s voice. Now I am so curious about what happens next. Keep writing.
Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA