The lure of the darkness

The Lure of The Darkness


I was in a mysterious room, suddenly darkness enveloped the room. I could vividly remember in my mind me playing outside with my siblings. But that was long ago until they disappeared…

All I see is darkness I cant remember how I got here but all I know is this is definitely not my lovely, average home.

I hope to see my family again! But I don’t think I have much time left…While I was slowly turning even more depressed, I heard a knock on the door!


When I heard the voice, I knew there was hope…

One thought on “The lure of the darkness”

  1. Josie,
    The narrator’s mood fits the prompt. Well done. I was relieved that there was hope at the end. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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