My mum suddenly rushed into my room and opened the door with a loud BANG!
“JOSIE, JOSIE! QUICKLY GET TO THE SHOPS NOW!” My mum cried.
“Why!?” I scrambled of off my bed.
“How dare you back chat me!”
“Whatever, why do I need to go to the shops?”
“IT DOESN’T MATTER, JUST GET THERE AS FAST AS YOU CAN! I’LL TEXT YOU WHY LATER! My mum yelled.
“ALRIGHT!” I cried.
I sprinted to the nearby restaurant, I look at the chef.
“Which way to the shops?” I panted.
He says, “that way.”
I sprint to the shops. I get a text from mum saying, could you get some bread?
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hi josie your story is really good you just might want to fix up the look to looked.